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Old February 16th, 2011, 08:01 AM
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“पगली ” –भ्रमर –हिंदी पोएम (कविता) .a collection of hindi poems by bhramar

"येभटकेलोगमिलजाते "
- भ्रमर हिंदी पोएम (कविता )

येलालरंग ,
इन्हेंउन्हेंहमें ,
हमसबकोप्याराहै ,
इसकेकतरेछीटेंबूँदें ,
अनायासजोयहाँवहां ,
बहरहेमिटटीमेंमिल रहे ,
पैरोंतलेरौंदेजारहे ,
शोलेभड़कारहे ,
नफरतकीदीवारबन ,
दिनप्रतिदिनरजनीतिमें ,
अणुपरमाणुढूंढरहे ,
बारूदभररहे ,
कपड़ाऔरमकानतोदूर ,
रोटीऔरपेटपरलात ,
येक्याकलयुगीबात !
कबतकजोहेंहम ,
कल्किकीबाट ,
आओहममिलजुल ,
छोड़रीतिढुलमुल ,
संजोयेसम्हालें ,
इनबहतीबूंदोंको ,
बनायेंतस्वीरेंसपनोकी ,
भरेंरंग - ये "लालरंग" ,
इन्हें - उन्हें - हमें ,
हम सबको - जो प्यारा है ,
लगताहैनजरलगगयी ,
किसीकीहमारे “स्वर्ग ” को ,
येकितनेप्यारेकितनेकामके ,
कुदरतकीअमूल्यदेन ,
निकलेथेजोहरियालीलाने ,
बसानेचाँद , सूरजआशियाँ ,
भटकगए …
भूलगए .. कुछरास्ता ..लक्ष्य ,
भटकरहे दिशाविहीन ,
पहाड़ोघाटियोंमें ,
भूखेलोगसहमेबच्चे ,
भागतेफिररहे …
काशकोईतथाकथित ..
अल्लाह …गाड …भगवान ..
ओझानेता ..राजनेता ,
जादूगरछड़ीघुमाता ,
“ये भटके लोग”मिल जाते ….
हरियालीलौटआती ,
औरइस "चमन " में -
फिरसे “अमन ”
वहीफूलखिलजाते …
सुरेंद्रशुक्ला “भ्रमर ” जम्मू & कश्मीर17 July ,2003
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“पगली ” –भ्रमर –हिंदी पोएम (कविता) .a collection of hindi poems by bhramar

" ये भटके लोग मिल जाते "
- भ्रमर हिंदी पोएम (कविता )

ये लाल रंग ,
इन्हें उन्हें हमें ,
हम सबको प्यारा है ,
इसके कतरे छीटें बूँदें ,
अनायास जो यहाँ वहां ,
बह रहे मिटटी में मिल रहे ,
पैरों तले रौंदे जा रहे ,
शोले भड़का रहे ,
नफरत की दीवार बन ,
दिन प्रतिदिन रजनीति में ,
अणु परमाणु ढूंढ रहे ,
बारूद भर रहे ,
कपड़ा और मकान तो दूर ,
रोटी और पेट पर लात ,
ये क्या कलयुगी बात !
कब तक जोहें हम ,
कल्कि की बाट ,
आओ हम मिल जुल ,
छोड़ रीति ढुलमुल ,
संजोये सम्हालें ,
इन बहती बूंदों को ,
बनायें तस्वीरें सपनो की ,
भरें रंग - ये " लाल रंग" ,
इन्हें - उन्हें - हमें ,
हम सबको - जो प्यारा है ,
लगता है नजर लग गयी ,
किसी की हमारे “ स्वर्ग ” को ,
ये कितने प्यारे कितने काम के ,
कुदरत की अमूल्य देन ,
निकले थे जो हरियाली लाने ,
बसाने चाँद , सूरज आशियाँ ,
भटक गए …
भूल गए .. कुछ रास्ता .. लक्ष्य ,
भटक रहे दिशा विहीन ,
पहाड़ो घाटियों में ,
भूखे लोग सहमे बच्चे ,
भागते फिर रहे …
काश कोई तथाकथित ..
अल्लाह … गाड … भगवान ..
ओझा नेता .. राजनेता ,
जादूगर छड़ी घुमाता ,
“ ये भटके लोग” मिल जाते ….
हरियाली लौट आती ,
और इस " चमन " में -
फिरसे “ अमन ”
वही फूल खिल जाते …
सुरेंद्रशुक्ला “ भ्रमर ” जम्मू & कश्मीर17 July ,2003
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Re: “पगली ” – A HINDI COLLECTION OF POEMS BY BHRAMAR

नारी शिक्षा - हिंदी क्षणिकाएं द्वारा भ्रमर

बेटी पढ़ी लिखी जो आये,
घर दुनिया को स्वर्ग बनाये


हम चाहें जो
दूर सितारों से भी जाये
कल की पीढ़ी,
खूब पढाओ नारी
मानो उसको स्वर्ग की सीढ़ी .

जननी जो पढ़ लिख
घर आये
मुन्ना मुन्नी वेद पढाये .

परचम लहराना जो दुनिया
अब से रोज पढ़ना मुनिया.

सुरेंद्रशुक्लाभ्रमर १६.२.२०११ जल (पी.बी.)
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Give freedom as it is required ......let us save our culture .....so that we can embrace the products / results /creation ..which keeps values ............

नारी शिक्षा - हिंदी क्षणिकाएं द्वारा भ्रमर

बेटी पढ़ी लिखी जो आये,
घर दुनिया को स्वर्ग बनाये


हम चाहें जो
दूर सितारों से भी जाये
कल की पीढ़ी,
खूब पढाओ नारी
मानो उसको स्वर्ग की सीढ़ी .

जननी जो पढ़ लिख
घर आये
मुन्ना मुन्नी वेद पढाये .

परचम लहराना जो दुनिया
अब से रोज पढ़ना मुनिया.

सुरेंद्रशुक्लाभ्रमर १६.२.२०११ जल (पी.बी.)
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“घाव ” बना नासूर -a collection of hindi poem by bhramar

........dard....(3) “घाव ” बना नासूर -a collection of hindi poem by bhramar

मेरे पाले में खेल रहा वो “ दोस्त ”,
“ फाइनल ” में उधर खड़ा “ ताल ” ठोंकता दिखा .

नसीहतें दिए गुर -ताल , काट - सिखा
‘ प्रहरी ’ बना –‘ मेडल’ दिलाया उनको .
और जब हम “ मातम ” मना एक ‘ अपने ’ का
लौटेघर – देखा ‘ सेंध ’ लगा दिया उसने .

सुरेन्द्रशुक्लाभ्रमर
१८.२.११ (जल पी बी )
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--Dard- “घाव ” बना नासूर -A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEM BY BHRAMAR


Unka ghar ‘jalta’ dekh
Gaye hm bujhane,
Kood pade aag me
Unko bachane,
Unhone fir….
Mere naam F.I.R.
Rapat likh ke
“Dhanyvad” kah diya….

Unki aankhon ke
bavandar me-fansa
ghoomta chala gaya
“vishaile” hontho ko.
Chumta chala gaya
Utha to “Railway ka-
Platform” Bheed..
“Luta” mai boojhta-chala gaya….

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18.2.11
“घाव ” बना नासूर -A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEM BY भ्रमर
उनका घर ‘जलता ’ देख
गए हम बुझाने ,
कूद पड़े 'आग' में
उनको बचाने ,
उन्होंने फिर ….
मेरे नाम F.I.R.
-रपट लिख के
“धन्यवाद ” कह दिया ….

उनकी आँखों के
बवंडर में -फंसा
घूमता चला गया
“विषैले ” होंठों को .
चूमता चला गया
उठा तो “रेलवे का -
प्लेटफ़ॉर्म ” भीड़ ..
“लुटा ” मै बूझता -चला गया ….

सुरेन्द्रशुक्लाभ्रमार
18.2.11
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--Dard- “घाव ” बना नासूर -A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEM BY BHRAMAR


Unka ghar ‘jalta’ dekh
Gaye hm bujhane,
Kood pade aag me
Unko bachane,
Unhone fir….
Mere naam F.I.R.
Rapat likh ke
“Dhanyvad” kah diya….

Unki aankhon ke
bavandar me-fansa
ghoomta chala gaya
“vishaile” hontho ko.
Chumta chala gaya
Utha to “Railway ka-
Platform” Bheed..
“Luta” mai boojhta-chala gaya….

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“ बुढ़िया माई ”
a collection of hindi poems by bhramar.

ऊँची दुकान
फीकी पकवान ,
मालिक ने फटकारा
डोकरी ! हट >>
कहीं दूर - उधर<<
जा के मर ..
बुढ़िया शरमाई
टोकरी उठाई
फिर कुछ
खिसक - खिसक
फूटपाथ पर
बैठ गयी

ले लो बाबू ..
बुढ़िया माई है लायी
“ देशी ”-
टमाटर - मटर
गेंदे और बेर ..
भीगती तालाबों में ,
लाती कभी कभी ,
कुआँ -बेरा –
कुमुदिनी...
कमल की नाल ,
सिंघाड़ा ..
फिर मुंह फाड़ा >>>
चिल्लाई -आवाज लगायी
दो पैसे सस्ते में ले लो
ले लो बाबू -“ देशी ” ले लो

कोई इक्का - दुक्का ,
“ देश ” वाले ,
“ देशी ” पर रुकते ,
‘ चार ’ बात सुनते ,
बाबू -खुद नहीं खाती -
मै -इसी से बच्चों
को पढ़ाती -
दो रोटी खाती ,
घर - संसार चलाती


भारी भीड़
लोग भागते
सुपर मार्केट
बिगबाजार ..
चले जा रहे ....

पार्किंग भी भर गयी
बुढ़िया खिसक गयी
धीरे .. धीरे ..
चौराहे से - मंदिर तक -
बचे खुचे फूल ,
गेंदे व् बेर ..
चढ़ा दिए
भगवान को .

फिर वो “ डोकरी ”
‘ धन्यवाद’ देती
ठिठुरती ..
साँझ ढलती ..
बढ़ चली घर –
"गाँव" कीओर ..
लिए अपनी “देशी ”-
टोकरी ..
ममता ...
और प्यारा “देश ”.

सुरेन्द्रशुक्लाभ्रमर ,
7.15पूर्वाह्न17.2.11
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Bhai,start itna dhamakedaar tha par anth bahut thanda laga
Swamiji dhamake ke baad to thanda hr kuchh ho jata hai ..utar chadhav din raat --a66a -bura ..kaala -gora yahi sb to jindgi ki kahani hai ..kabhi dhoop kabhi chhavn ..

let us try ..as u hv heard try n try donn be shy....

hamare chitrala ji hame 5 threads bhi chalane ki ijajat nahi dete .. hope he ll allow ....tc

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Swamiji dhamake ke baad to thanda hr kuchh ho jata hai ..utar chadhav din raat --a66a -bura ..kaala -gora yahi sb to jindgi ki kahani hai ..kabhi dhoop kabhi chhavn ..

let us try ..as u hv heard try n try donn be shy....

hamare chitrala ji hame 5 threads bhi chalane ki ijajat nahi dete .. hope he ll allow ....tc

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kaahe badnaam karte ho bhaiyya... hum kaun hote hain sasur aapko ijaazat dene waale...maine to bas aagrah kiya tha...aap jab se aaye hain...kam se kam 12 13 kavitayein chenp chuke hain... sabke liye alag thread khol dete to yahi swami jee aapke peechhe danda lekar daude aate....

Baaki aap maalik hain...aapki marzi.... 50 thread kholein... meri parwaah na karein... I am no one to stop you from ्् posting anything.
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A request to our moderators ...

Our good member is new to internet, computers, and forums ... cannot blame him if he is having difficult time understanding our requests ... help him out ... please ... gather all his threads to create one super thread so we get to enjoy Bharmar Kaviji's luscious poems.

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Re: “घाव ” बना नासूर -A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEM BY BHRAMAR

"एंटी वायरस "
सडा जा रहा “ सिस्टम” सारा
आओ इसको रोकें…
घुसे ' वायरस' कुछ ही इसमें,
' स्लो" प्वोइजन जैसे ,
'बूढ़े' एंटी वायरस अपने,
' हाथ' उठाये - जाएँ,
आओ वायरस- एंटी
भाई ' युवा' नया बनायें .
नया ' 'जनरेसन' '
सुपर डुपर जो ,
उसकी जांच दूर से कर लें ,
' बाहर ' ही हम रोकें - उसको ,
घुसे -' 'रजिस्टर' ' चोर - जो
पहले कर ' 'स्कैन'' निकालें ,
'अन इन्तेरेप्तेड" पॉवर सप्लाई
करें सुनिश्चित -
' मदर बोर्ड ' का ध्यान रखें,
हम - -'ब्रेन' - सी. पि. यु. - कूल ,
' दुश्मन ' की हर ' चाल '
को भांपे -
बने नहीं हम ' फूल' .
' सेक्रेट ' सुख सब ' होम '
भरा है ''चाबी' ' इसमें लावो
उनके थ्रेट से होश रखें
पर कभी नहीं घबराएँ.

मर्यादित - डीसेंट साइटें -
' कल्चर ' -अपने जाएँ
फूहड़- भद्दे -कल्चर- वल्चर
कोई क्यों अपनाएं .

गति धीमी कर यहाँ ' रजिस्टर '
'' पासवर्ड' ' ले जाये - फिर तो
' कब्ज़ा ' सारे '" सिस्टम" ' - उसका
हम ' गुलाम' हो जाएँ.

सुरेन्द्रशुक्लाभ्रमर
१९.११.२०१०
जल (पी. बी. )
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"Patang" – A COLLECTION OF hindi poem(kavita) by bhramar.

" निमंत्रण"


अरबों साल का है ये तारा
पृथ्वी - गोल - चपटा ब्रह्माण्ड ,
सूरज से कितने सूरज हैं
किसने , ' 'क्लोन' ' बना डाला ,

कहें ' भ्रमर'- जादूगर आओ ,
धरती पर - कुछ क्लोन बनाओ ,
रोटी - कपडे और मकान का
भूखे नंगे बेघर को दो .

नदी दूध की - स्वर्ग वही हो ,
'' कल्पतरु' ' और ऋषि मुनियों की ,
' शांति ' ख़ुशी - संस्कृति का-
अपनी - क्लोन बना डालो.

पेट भरेगा - रीढ़ हो सीधी
' मस्तक ' अपना ऊँचा होगा
' चाँद ' सितारे सोच तभी
फिर नयी ' 'चेतना' '
इस 'बंजर' में - ' जड़ ' थामेगी .

सुरेंद्रशुक्लाभ्रमर
१९.२.११ जल पी. बी
६.१६ पूर्वाह्न .
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<<<<< बाज ( ईगल )>>-BHRAMAR
A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEMS (KAVITA) BY BHRAMAR
कभी कभी मन कहता मेरा
"बाज" बने उड़ जाऊं
"मुक्त" फिरूं मै
आसमान में
चोंच बहुत है तेज हमारी
बड़ी नुकीली बहुत कंटीली
पंजे बड़े हैं " जालिम"
'दूर-दृष्टि" भी पाई मैंने
"पंखे" हैं मजबूत
उड़ता जाऊं उड़ता जाऊं
कभी पकड़ ना आऊँ.

कोई अगर ' साहस' भी करता
उसको ' घूर' डराऊं
छोटे - मोटे - बड़े शिकारी
भागें 'सिर पर पांव रखे'
अपने ' अंडे बच्चे से '
जो रत्ती भर प्यार करें
अगर ' धृष्ट - दुस्साहस' -
कोई - मार झपट्टा आऊँ
मेरा बस जो चले अगर
तो - मार उसे मै खाऊँ
दो - चार अगर वे आयें
लेकर अपना ' जाल ' बड़ा
मै भी अपना ' झुण्ड' लिए
उड़ - जाऊं - देखूं -कौन बड़ा

ना डरता मै - पकड़ गया जो
बंधन- कैद में जकड गया तो
' तोते ' सा मै पिंजरे बैठा
' घर का खाना खाऊँ '
' नाज ' हमें मुझ पर तो होगा
सारा जीवन उड़ा फिर मै
छीन- झपट -भर रक्खा
अब भी कितना भरा पड़ा है
' गुप्त-खजाना ' -
"हाड़- मांस" भी
खोह - कन्दरा -
दबा दबाया रक्खा.
सुरेंद्रशुक्लाभ्रमर
२०.२.११ ७.१४ मध्याह्न
जल( पी.बी.)

Thanx to all who feel " Dard" de pain of our society ..hope u ll understand the sense meaning ....this platform is not for Ras-Rang ...for dat v can meet some other platform ..Bharamar
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A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEMS (KAVITA) BY BHRAMAR

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Shukarambaan pai, a question is puzzling me... why have you dedicated all these poems of yours to Kavita Who is she
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