“Naari”- Bhramar-Hindi kavita (Hindi poem).

[chitrala]

Originally Posted by soniya 2

diary writing type ...hahaha .
Na chitrala , bilkul nahi

kinna jhooth bolti hai...

[soniya 2]

Originally Posted by chitrala

kinna jhooth bolti hai...

trust me , main itni sulghee hoi larki nahi hoon

I donot write diary . why will i lie abt it.

[chitrala]

Originally Posted by soniya 2

trust me , main itni sulghee hoi larki nahi hoon

I donot write diary . why will i lie abt it.

Suljhee... not sulghee... sulghee would be smouldering

[soniya 2]

Originally Posted by chitrala

Suljhee... not sulghi... sulghee would be smouldering

haha ... han wohi , suljhee

[soniya 2]

Per aap kafi sulghee hoe lagte hain. No seriously. Donot tell me you write diary n all . Geek type bhi sound karte ho ..

[chitrala]

Originally Posted by soniya 2

Per aap kafi sulghee hoe lagte hain. No seriously. Donot tell me you write diary n all . Geek type bhi sound karte ho ..

hahahahaa galat baat.

keeping a diary is not geeky... i used to... long ago...rarely do now... There are 6-7 dairies kept in my room back in India and I always fear that my parents would read it someday... I should destroy them before that happens.

[soniya 2]

Originally Posted by chitrala

hahahahaa galat baat.

keeping a diary is not geeky... i used to... long ago...rarely do now... There are 6-7 dairies kept in my room back in India and I always fear that my parents would read it someday... I should destroy it before that happens.

hahaha ........

[Sane Less]

So... you guys have splattered this thread too

[motowner]

Get a room you two.. yahoo chat room.

[swami]

Originally Posted by Sane Less

So... you guys have splattered this thread too

Originally Posted by motowner

Get a room you two.. yahoo chat room.

Chitrala talking to himself

[shuklabhramar5]

Originally Posted by motowner

Get a room you two.. yahoo chat room.

Motowner ji perhaps u hv seen many ppl are involved in non sense criticism they are going to enter their name in guinese book of records by posting thousand nonsense posts in this stage ...some or burnt ..sulghee ...geeky..some using like rediffbol and yahoom messanger ..seems they r barred frm all others....if their interest is in other things i do not know y they log on Kavita or poetry...and if they feel they are much better y they are not coming / appearing in others Kavita manch , Kavita kosh, etc ........gd luck to all

Bhramar.........

[shuklabhramar5]

............4...............women education.....Bhramar


Ham chahen to dur sitaron se bhi jaye…
Kal ki pidhi
khub padhao nari ..
Mano usko swarg ki sidhi .


let us forget de gender son or daughter and educate well to our Naari ..woman..girl child ...as well as v can

Bhramar.

............5............ vo kya jaane aankhen kaisi kaisi duniya hoti...Bhramar

VO KYA JANE AANKHE KAISI-KAISI DUNIYA HOTI -HINDI POEM

Nanha paudha ropa kyari,
Dhire dhire bada hua,
Kabhi gira,
Kuchh jhuka kabhi,
Apne pavn pe khada hua.


Hamne seencha paala usko,
Mn he mn muskate,
“kal” ki soch sochkar,
bhayi thoda dar bhi jate.


Paudha kal jo bada hua to,
Kali khilegi,
Phool khilega,
“Khusbu” khush kar degi,
hr man.


Meri hari bhari bagiya me,
Sundar phool khila-
Dekha jo, lalchaya,
Kuchh najar lagaya.


Kuchh bhole se log,
Dekhte ‘roj’,
Khushi ho jate,
Mujh ‘Maali’ ko
Dhanya kahe vo-
Aashirvachan sunate.


Magar vahin kuchh
Natkhat bhaunre,
‘Chor’ kabhi aa jate,
Ird gird sundardat ke,
vo chhalkapti mandrate.


Pankhudiyon ko noch
raund kuchh,
Foole nahi samate- dekha,
Har banaye , gale lagaye
Kuchh ko
mn muskate –dekha.


‘Phool’ ye pyara
komal najuk
har aankhon me bsta ,
jara jhum ke
khusbu dekar
antar Dil me utarta.


‘vo’ kya jane
aankhen kaisi-kaisi
duniya hoti,
kuchh me pyar bhara-
to kuchh me,
Shola Nafrat hoti.


‘Kal’ ki soch soch-
ham bhayi, isiliye to darte,
na naino me neend,chain
na- soch soch bs thakte.


Kin hathon me ,
kis bagiya me,
Phool ye nyara,
Khusbu pyari,
Kaisi hogi aankhen uski,
Kya “Maali” sa Antarman?


Roj dulare roj khilaye,
Seenche, paale khusi rahe,
Phool ye pyara sada khila ho,
‘Khusbu’ hardam bani rahe.


Surendrashukla ‘Bhramar’
Jalandhar Punjab,
30/1/11 6.46AM.

[motowner]

Originally Posted by shuklabhramar5

Motowner ji perhaps u hv seen many ppl are involved in non sense criticism they are going to enter their name in guinese book of records by posting thousand nonsense posts in this stage ...some or burnt ..sulghee ...geeky..some using like rediffbol and yahoom messanger ..seems they r barred frm all others....if their interest is in other things i do not know y they log on Kavita or poetry...and if they feel they are much better y they are not coming / appearing in others Kavita manch , Kavita kosh, etc ........gd luck to all

Bhramar.........

Naaraz mat ho Shuklaji... aap apna bhramar chalu rakho..

Yeh chitra-soniya ki to aisi ki taisi

[chitrala]

Originally Posted by motowner

Naaraz mat ho Shuklaji... aap apna bhramar chalu rakho..

Yeh chitra-soniya ki to aisi ki taisi

Abe tu bhadka mat usse... pahle hi se load lekar baitha hai...ki maine uske harek poem ke liye naye thread kholne par objection kiya hua hai... ye poet types bahut sensitive hote hain

[shuklabhramar5]

“Building the Nation”

Use your power,
Being a clever
As intellectual
Not destroyer..

Lest you
An Engineer
Doctor
Innovator
Editor
Or
Moderator,
Aim should be
common
“Building the Nation”
a newly creation….
lest
a poet
or artist
dramatist
writer …
or film maker..
musician
or magician..

Feel the pain
Suffocation
Struggle
And strain…
Anxiety
Poverty
From your brain…
Open heart
Contribute
And share
Always dare
To fight
Evils….
Live with style
In a fashion
Which thrills…..

Use your power,
Being a clever
As intellectual
Not destroyer..

Surendrashukla”Bhramar”
17.2.11 Jal (7.35 A.M.)