My poems!

Mahakali · #1 April 22nd, 2011, 11:24 AM

When I was young, I used to be a pote. My pems were stolen from me...

But I still remember some of them.

Pain-e-heart

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

In the past, I was just a peto
In the past, i was just a peot
You have made me, a lover.

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

soniya 2 · #2 April 22nd, 2011, 11:28 AM

haha sweet

krantikari · #3 April 22nd, 2011, 11:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mahakali

When I was young, I used to be a pote. My pems were stolen from me...

But I still remember some of them.

Pain-e-heart

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

In the past, I was just a peto
In the past, i was just a peot
You have made me, a lover.

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

You are funny man.

marvelous · #4 April 22nd, 2011, 08:56 PM

great stuff especially... Pote, pems, peto, peot...those r funny!!!!

freekundli · #5 August 16th, 2016, 11:02 PM

Good one.

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