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Old April 9th, 2016, 10:47 AM
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To be frank, I am not a novice. I haven't told this to anyone before, but I used to be a poet when I was much younger. I worked in bollywood. Then I quit. Don't ask why.
Yes, your talent must have rusted by now. We can polish it. I can be your guide and mentor... and we will make you into a brilliant star once again. And don't worry about bollywood heroines... I will ensure that you do not lay a hand on you.
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Gujju are saying Jignes for jignesh, very irritating. And ne for na in hindi.
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Old April 9th, 2016, 11:05 AM
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Deedar kiya karte te
tere husn ka
deedar kiya karte te
tere husn ka
taqdeer ne maara lafa
bikar gaya sab wafa-jafa
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To be frank, I am not a novice. I haven't told this to anyone before, but I used to be a poet when I was much younger. I worked in bollywood. Then I quit. Don't ask why.
The goal is to become like Taher Shah... the best in the world. In fact, after reading all the whatsapp and facebook posts, we should change our goal to become better than Taher Shah. The sky should not even be our limit. We should go beyond... where no man has ever gone before.
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Old April 10th, 2016, 01:08 PM
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Re: saneless musings

टूटते तारे
ख्वाहिशें पूरी करते हैं
सोच मैंने भी
हर बार देख उन्हें
बस तुम्हें माँगा था...
ज़हन की दीवारों से
मेरे ख्वाब उतार
पूरा करने को
तुझको अज़ीज़
हर ख्वाब टाँगा था...
सच...
तेरे इश्क में
बेवकूफियाँ बहुत की थीं...
वो तो अच्छा हुआ जो
तुम इश्क को ही
बेवकूफ़ी साबित कर गए
वरना हम सारी ज़िन्दगी
बेवकूफ़ ही रह जाते...
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Old April 10th, 2016, 06:58 PM
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The goal is to become like Taher Shah... the best in the world. In fact, after reading all the whatsapp and facebook posts, we should change our goal to become better than Taher Shah. The sky should not even be our limit. We should go beyond... where no man has ever gone before.
I have been in hiding and not fully connected to the world of poetry. I have no idea who this taher shah dude is, but i suppose he is famous. I don't have such aspirations of going into no man before land. Been there done that. It's not worth all the fuss. There is a reason nobody had been there before.

Btw, how the heck did you find out that bollywood heriones were involved in my past? What else do you know?
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I have been in hiding and not fully connected to the world of poetry. I have no idea who this taher shah dude is, but i suppose he is famous. I don't have such aspirations of going into no man before land. Been there done that. It's not worth all the fuss. There is a reason nobody had been there before.

Btw, how the heck did you find out that bollywood heriones were involved in my past? What else do you know?
Taher Shah is all the latest rage... even Hitler is fuming about him. He is the best... he can single-handedly bring an end to all music as we know it, he is that good.

As for your bollywood trysts, I have gone through the crime records... it is all detailed there. Don't worry... I can understand the trauma. As I said, if you make me your guru and mentor, the bollywood heroines will have to go through me before they get to you. They will have to finish with my dedh (foot) before they even lay a finger on you.
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Old April 10th, 2016, 07:23 PM
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Re: saneless musings

Yeh lo Taher Shah ko
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Old April 11th, 2016, 06:23 AM
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Taher Shah is all the latest rage... even Hitler is fuming about him. He is the best... he can single-handedly bring an end to all music as we know it, he is that good.

As for your bollywood trysts, I have gone through the crime records... it is all detailed there. Don't worry... I can understand the trauma. As I said, if you make me your guru and mentor, the bollywood heroines will have to go through me before they get to you. They will have to finish with my dedh (foot) before they even lay a finger on you.

What crime records? I never reported anything because they were powerful women, inside the bedroom and outside. I should stop, I said too much already!
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Zindagi ne itne dhakke diye
ki maut kabhi khabaar poonchti hai
ke ab kaafi hua ke ek aur de doon

Samay hi ek aisi dost hai
jo har dhakke ko
ek dheemi-gati ki yaad bana deti hai

Zindagi ne itne dhakke diye
bas samay hi ek dost hai
kabhi khabaar rula deti hai
par aksar hansa deti hai
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Old April 11th, 2016, 10:57 AM
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Zindagi ne itne dhakke diye
ki maut kabhi khabaar poonchti hai
ke ab kaafi hua ke ek aur de doon

Samay hi ek aisi dost hai
jo har dhakke ko
ek dheemi-gati ki yaad bana deti hai

Zindagi ne itne dhakke diye
bas samay hi ek dost hai
kabhi khabaar rula deti hai
par aksar hansa deti hai
Nice .. repped!

This reminds me of a sher

Zindagi ne diye bade dhoke
Maine kaha zindagi ne diye hain bade dhoke
Usne kaha tu rota bohot hai, it's okay.
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Few from top of my head,..... ( not self-made )
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ना गवाह मिलते हैं, ना लाश मिलती है,
शायद इसलिये लोग भावनाओ का क़त्ल किया करते हैं!




जमी पे रह अभी तू आसमान रहने दे
धुँवा है हर तरफ ऊँची उड़ान रहने दे
मिटा न अपने पाँवो के सब निशाँ आखिर
तू अपने इल्म का कुछ तो निशान रहने दे




Ajab mukam par thara hua hai kafila jindagi ka.
Sakoon dhoondhne gaye the,
Neend hi gawan baithe.
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Re: saneless musings

Us waqt mera sarr fakhar say bhuland hogaya "Faraz"

Jab meri Dadi bathroom mein geerthe geerthe sambhli... aur dil par hath rakh kar boli..... "Aal iz well........Aal iz well"




Manzilain bhi uss ki theen
Rasta bhi uss ka tha..
Ek mai he akaila tha
Qaflaa bhi uss ka tha
Sath chalnay ki soch bhi uss ki thee
phir raah badalnay ka faisla bhi uss ka tha
Ajj kio akaila hun?
Dil yeh sawal karta hai
Log tou uss k thay..
kia khuda bhi uss ka tha?


Amjad Islam Amjad..





Chubhte hue khwabon se kah do
Ki Aab aaya na karen

Hum tanha tassali se rahte hai
Bekar na uljhaya karen





दिल की किताब में गुलाब उनका था,
रात की नींद में ख्वाब उनका था,
कितना प्यार करते हो जब हमने पूछा,
मर जायंगे तुम्हारे बिना ये जबाब उनका था
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Re: saneless musings

आप वह नहीं होते,.. जो आप दिखाते है !
आप वह होते है,.......जो आप छुपाते है !



हम ने उन की याद में,.... रो रो के टब भर दिए !
वोह आये,...................और, नहा के चल दिए !!



बस एक ही उल्लू काफ़ी है बरबाद गुलिस्तां करने को
हर शाख पे उल्लू बैठा है अंजामे गुलिस्तां क्या होगा


पतंग का रुख तो मेरी ही तरफ था,
अफसोस लूट लिया उसे ऊँचे मकान वालो ने।


मेरे शब्दो को इतनी शिद्दत से ना पढा करो...!!!....
कुछ याद रह गया तो मुझे भूल नही पाओगे.


बड़ी मुद्दत से इक आस लिए बैठे हैं,
एक उम्र से हाथों में पैमाने लिए बैठे हैं,
उसने कहा था कि मैं आऊंगी मिलने,
उस दिन से आँखों में इंतज़ार लिए बैठे हैं.
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Doha of Rahim:

Deen sabhan ko lakhat hain
deenahi lakhai na koi
Jo Rahim deenahi lakhai
deenbandhu sam hoi

The poor seek help from everyone
but no one helps the poor
The person who helps the poor
becomes like a deenbandhu

In Hindi literature the word 'deenbandhu', which literally means 'friend of the poor', is often used to denote God.
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