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Old February 14th, 2011, 05:47 AM
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Thumbs up : Naari-A Collection of Hindi poems (kavita)byBhramar,ghav bana nasoor,patang,pagli

Naari- Bhramar-Hindi poem.

Naari ka ek
roop khojne,
gahrayi me
utar gaya
bandha-pada
tha us
Keechar me
Jaise Patta-Naal
Kamal tha upar-
khila vo Naari.

Usne mujhe
Nikala
Chillaya jab
Roya jee bhar
Dekha usne
Goad le apne
Gale-lagaya.

Sang me khele-
Koode-Chhoti,
Pyar lutati
Sang sang me
Mere roti
Vo thi mere
Ghar ka gahna
Kahte jisko
Hm the Bahna.

Bachpan ki kuchh
Sakhi saheli,
Aankh michauli,
Rang-rangoli,
Ve hamjoli
Muhboli-
Chhupa-chhupi
Sab gayi door
Gopi-Krishna
Ki- Naari
Ban ke vo
Albeli.
Boojh n paaya
Man ke unko
Ek paheli.

Mn me utha
Shor kb rukta,
Ye kishor man
Sapne bunata
Kali-phool
Aadam-Havva
Saa mukt
Hriday fir
Bekrar kuchh
Rahe tadapta
Jalta shola
Baadal bijli
Chidiya-titli
Dekh-dekh kar
Chhoone ko man
Udne ko betaab
Gharaunda khoje
Jaata-gaata.

Aaye baadal
Mor nachta
Thirak-thirak man
Ude gagan
Kuchh chali hava
Vo Madhur suhani
Chhu nikli
Jab badan hamara
Jaag gaya
Bauraya man
Sparsh kiya
Saanso me bhar
Praanvayu.

Jeene ka sankalp
Liya sang
Maa bahna vo
Dost hamari
Rahti mujhpe
vo manuhari.
Sukh-dukh sada
Saath balihari
Nyochhavar jo
vo ek Naari.

Jo paaya mai
Pyar aaj tak
Kaise mai barsaun
Dil me bojh
Liye mai ghoomun
Bhara kumbh sa
Baadal kyon naa
Mai ban jaun
Rimjhim boonde
Barse jb dharti tarse
fir tab
Uge beej-kuchh
Paudhe-paley-
Badhe haantho se
Mere. Maine unhe
Khilaya-khela
Man bhar.

Roop ek Ganga-
Saraswti
Sita ka fir
Paaya-mujhe dulare
Pyar kare vo
Rakhti mera maan
Jis par hai vishwas
Bharosa
Man me hai
Abhimaan.

Ek paavn pe
Khadi vo rahti
Maa-Baba ke kaam
Uska prem
Pavitra hai itna
Jaise chamke-
Sona-shuddh-
Khara vo here
Si hai
Jise Jauhari
Jaane. Kahen
Bhramar-jo
doobe utraye
thaah lagaye
janam janam bhar
Bhav saagar me
Vo Naari
Ko jaane
Maane.

Surendrashuklabhramar
13.2.11 7.30 A.M.
Jal (PB).


Title :- Kauaa and Hans ( Crow and goose) Bharmar hindi poem.
Kauaa and Hans ( Crow and goose) Bharmar hindi poem.
Kucchh kauvon me,
Ek hans jo,
Fanse rahe,
kya hove?

Kauye chahe noche-
Khaye-ye bhi,
Mere sang,
Gore se kaala ,
Ban jaye-sikhe-
Ye gun dhang.

Hans doodh sa-
Moti bhaye
Shital- pavitra-
Roj nahaye.

Kudrat ne kuchh
Alag banaya .kyon-
Chore vo dhang?
Kauye kavn kavn kr jage,
Man me unke jaise
Jang. Chhiri hai
Roj .bhag rahe-
Kuchh kaanp rahe,
Tarkeeben bedhang
Chaal- Jaal ve
bunte ghumen,
khate peete sath.

Hans bechara ..
Chaukanna to..us
Kapat buddhi anjan.

vo apni he gaye jata,
rahta par tha sath,
kauye usse naa lad paate
gaata jo vo sanch,
antar-roop badalta
kuchh pal
sbke muh bs haan.

Khatra jb dekha
Kauvon ne swarth,
Dharam gun apne,
Fenko isko,
Maro isko,
Chamri chalo utaren,
Ya ye apna..
Rang badal de,
Ya fir chalo-
jala den. neend n
aati. Pagal ve-
sb bhaage firte-
raat raat bhar
unko bhayi
sapne hi bs khaate.

Bhramar kahen,
jb rang badalna,
roop badalna,
itna aasan hota,
to kauva bhi-
mere bhayi kyon
na Hans sa hota???

Surendrashuklabhramar
8.03 A.M. Jal (PB) 11.2.11

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Tum garib he late ho mahgayi Hindi Poem Bharamar

Ragghu Kaka !
Sukhiya ,Buddhu,
Tum garib hi-
Kahte hain vo
Laate ho mahgayi,

Becho gehu-
khet baag kuchh,
Share fund lagao,
Nahi lottery me hi-
Apni kismet ko ajmao,
Ya sarkar ka jadu sikho,
Sapno ka kl mahal banao,

Padhna chhoro Khelo khel,
School benchte tumko,
Tum cricketer ban bik jao,
Ya fir paanch karorepati ab-
Kaun banega- Davn lagao,

Gunda-Neta-Sadhu banker,
Bheed me daaka dalo milkar-
ya smuggling -
beauty parlour-call girls se-
nain milakar- hera feri,

Makhmal na ab Kaka-Samjho,
Jaal buno tum,
Panchhi pakro
Baaj sa koi,
Tej aur ud jao,
Mitthu Tota bankar Kaka !
Maalik- boss rijhao,

Do chandi ke kangan baali,
Mat gado n bandho gathri,
Ja videsh rakh aao,
Vahin badhega
hava hai achchhi,
Farm Norm aur-
barish achchhi,
Nange- dhoti pahan hi jee lo,
Kuchh din jhuggi karo basera,
Gar kaanpi n duniya kal,
Ya aai nahi sunami,
Jor agar naa aayi aandhi,
Ye jag Kaka ! hoga tera,
Hoga naya savera,

Badnaami teri jayegi,
tum garib hi vo kahte,
jo laate mahgayi,

Khans- Khans kar- paani peete,
Fati Bivayi (Cracks in heel)-
mitti dhote,
Gandhi se budhau Kaka ne
Ye aawaj lagayi,
Bail mar raha-ghas kaat le,
Do roti hi mujhe daal de,
Pet bharega jo mera to,
Kaam karun mai bhayi ??
Vuu to dayan khaye jaat ba,
Mahgayi Mahgayi.

Surendrashuklabhramar,
http://surenrashuklabhramar.blogspot.com
7.17A.M. 9.2.11 Jal (PB).
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चाँव -चाँव करते अन्ना जी-Bhramar5
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नए हमारे डाइरेक्टर श्री
शक-सोना जी आये
स्वागत अभिवादन में भैया
पञ्च सितारा होटल लाये
सूप-सलाद पापड़ पकवान से
कुछ मीठा हो जाए तक -में
बड़े फायदे भ्रष्टाचार के
सारे उनने हमें गिनाये
इन पचास सालों में देखो
देश गया कितना आगे
नंगे जो हम रहे घूमते
अब ए.सी. में चढ़ के आते
गाँव -गाँव में बिजली पानी
पक्के घर हैं -खुशहाली
लात मार कर गाँव से आई
बीबी -मेरी -महरानी
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बाबा माँ मर रहे अगर जो
टी टी की तुम जेब भरो या
दो सौ दलाल दे टिकट मंगाओ
वेट लिस्ट लत-मरुवा बैठे
उन पर चढ़ -चढ़ के तुम जाओ
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ट्रैफिक जाम या जांच फंसो तो
सौ का नोट भरे मुट्ठी में
हवलदार को तुम पकडाओ
भले मरीज मारें उस ट्रैफिक
अपनी मंजिल-तय कर जाओ
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कोर्ट कचहरी -एडवोकेट को
सौ -पचास दे "डेट" बढाओ
सौ वर्षों तक खेती जोतो
दुश्मन बूढा कर मरवाओ
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मंत्री -तंत्री नोट फेंक के
शिक्षा का लाईसेंस मंगाओ
ड्रेस किताब कॉपी प्रोजेक्ट से
कई -कई स्कूल खोल के
लल्लू से लाला बन जाओ
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जी डी पी की ग्रोथ है इतनी
मुद्रा स्फीति है बड़ी घटी
चाँव -चाँव करते अन्ना जी
क्या हम सब को आज कमी
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घर मंदिर सब भरे हुए हैं
सोने चांदी के तहखाने
कहाँ है मक्का जौ बजरी अब
देखो दस प्लेट- सजे हैं-खाने
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पांच हजार का निगले खाना
हम बाहर को आये
घंटों भर थे जाम में अटके
हवलदार ना कोई आये
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कीचड़ सड़कों भरी हुयी थी
धुवां धुल -कोलाहल -चर्चा
ए.सी.गाडी हम बैठे थे
बड़ी जोर की लगी थी वर्षा
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युवती -नंगा बच्चा लटकाए
भीग पोंछती बाहर शीशा
लिए कटोरा खट -खट करती
दाँत दिखा रोती -मुस्काती
चार दिनों से भूखा -प्यासा
भला हो बाबू -
तेरा-मेरा- बच्चा रोता
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हमने अपने निर्देशक को
दुनिया फिर दिखलाई
ये है "सर " जी वचपन अपना
ये है भरी जवानी
पेट में जब कूदें चूहे तो
याद है आती नानी
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परदे पर अंगडाई सैंया
बाहर बहुत लड़ाई
रोती -नमक भी कहीं नहीं है
कहीं है मखनी दाल -मलाई
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नोट-वोट दंगे फसाद से
दारु-ट्रेलर सब दिखलाया
मारे चौके छक्के हम ने
भ्रष्टाचार का रूप दिखाया
--------------------------------
पाक -बांगला चीन का बार्डर
कारगिल-स्विस तक सभी घुमाया
दो रोटी- की खातिर हमने
बच्चे-कुत्ते लड़ते कैसे
कूड़ेदान - दिखाया
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हम पचास सालों हैं पीछे
नहीं बढे कुछ आगे
हाथ मिलाते -नजर बचाते
प्लेन चढ़े -वे -छुपते भागे
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भ्रमर ५
८-८.२२ पूर्वाह्न
११.१२.२०११
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Re: Naari- Bhramar-Hindi kavita (Hindi poem).

oye shukla,
kya ghatiya kavita likhta hai yaar tu
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Re: Naari-A Collection of Hindi poems (kavita).,ghav bana nasoor,patang ,pagli..

[quote=shuklabhramar5;543089]Naari- Re: Naari-A Collection of Hindi poems (kavita).,ghav bana nasoor,patang ,pagli.Nasha aankh se chhalka.
Naari ka ek
roop khojne,
gahrayi me
utar gaya

IT WAS NOT A REPLY QUOTED AGAINST ABOVE BUT TO KEEP ALL CREATIONS IN ONE THREAD ONLY...CHITRALA JI .......

Nasha Aankh se chhalka-Bhramar-Hindi poem.

Shahnayi ne geet sunakar,
Gath Bandhan kr,
Do dil praan milaya,
Bachpan ka vo pala-
Sunahri sapna sach ho aaya,
Chhuyi muyi si sharmayi si,
Dulhan bhaanvar ghume saat,
Saat bachan vo saat pratigya,
Agni ke sang le le,
Aashirvachan judayi lekar,
Mahal dumahale tyag,
Ek ajnabi ke sang
chal di-pakda usne haath,
pahla vo sparsh haay re>>>>
mn uska lahraaya,
jaise hava Basanti ne ho,
Kali ko phool banaya,
punkesar kesar hr dal-
madmast aaj gadraaya,
madhur gandh maadkta ne,
fir bhaunre ko lalchaya,
nasha chadha purjor gandh-
vo mn me halchal maare,
koas rahe kb din jaye ab,
Nisha aa pavn pasare,
ghoom raha bhaunra aa baithe,
nain se nain mila le,
chaand chuupa hai baadal ghunghat-
ab to aa ke khole,
saji huyi murat si dulhan,
kone me thi simti,sisak-
uthi-sparsh-pyar fir jam,
najar ka pee ke-uthti lahren,
jalta tan-mn nasha aankh-
se chhalka-hothon se pyala
fir pee ke aalingan me bandh ke
doori kitni kam kr daalen,
koshis fir ahsas.kuchh pal me-
kuchh yaad raha n Hichkoli-
khati vo Doli aa pahunchi-
seema ke paar-ghar me , ek naye
aangan me phool khilenge.

Shahnayi ne geet sunakar,
Gath Bandhan kr,
Do dil praan milaya.

7.32A.M. Jal (PB) 12.2.11
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नारी
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श्वेत विन्दु -हिम अंचल उपजी
पुरुष-जटा -तृण-पत्थर उलझी
है गंगा सी धारा
शीतल -पावन -करती जाती
भूख मिटाती
प्यास बुझाती
सुख -नैनों को देती जाती
सदा हंसाती
कभी रुलाती
वेद -ग्रन्थ सब -तारा !!
ममता- वात्सल्य की है ये देवी
काली का ये रूप धरे तो
बनती -वलि वेदी
करुणा -व्यथा का भान है रखती
दिल उपजे दुःख दूना
ज्वालामुखी है -कभी भड़कती
होती आग बबूला
सच्ची है ये मान की प्यासी
प्यार मिले तो आत्म -समर्पण
न्योछावर ये होती
करती है श्रृंगार धरा का
प्रतिपल रचती रहती
टूटे -धागे जोड़-जोड़ कर
नभ -ब्रह्माण्ड -बनाती
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रेगिस्तान में जल की बूँदें
जेठ -दुपहरी में है छाया
डूब रहे को है ये तिनका
प्रभु ना जानें इसकी माया

जग -जननी है -देवी है ये
पूजनीय है -वन्दनीय है
लक्ष्मी है ये- काली है ये
माँ-शारद है वेद -ज्ञान है
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भगिनी है ये -यही है दुहिता
नारी-पत्नी जग-कल्याणी
हिरनी सी उच्छ्रिन्खल भी है
दोस्त यही दुश्मन सब- कुछ है
रौद्र रूप धारण करती ये
रात है काली -नागिन है ये
महानदी है -लील सके ये
सुन्दर जग को
आओ इस को एक दिशा दें
जग कल्याण इधर होता है
इसे दिखा दें
कहें भ्रमर आ फिर सो जाएँ
चैन -शान्ति से चिर कालों तक
बिना व्यथा के
सदा-सदा ब्रह्माण्ड चलाती आई है ये
बिन बाधा के
प्यारी है
पावन -नारी -है ये -शुचिता !!
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८-८.३० पूर्वाह्न
१०.१२.२०११ यच पी
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Re: Naari-A Collection of Hindi poems (kavita).,ghav bana nasoor,patang ,pagli..

Y\yaar, kisi ko yaad hai ki woh kaun tha jo aise hi replies galat quote kiya karta tha. Aur kabh kabhi confusion ho jaata tha... that was a feamle id if I remember correctly.
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Y\yaar, kisi ko yaad hai ki woh kaun tha jo aise hi replies galat quote kiya karta tha. Aur kabh kabhi confusion ho jaata tha... that was a feamle id if I remember correctly.

really , han han .... i donot remember , sorry
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was it you??? Cant remember..
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bad memory ... Main nahi thi for sure .
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bad memory ... Main nahi thi for sure .
btw, you do sound like those chicks who write poetry... ek aadh namoona ho jaye.
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btw, you do sound like those chicks who write poetry... ek aadh namoona ho jaye.

han kyon nahi


" Deekha hai peehli bar
wah wah
deekha hai pehli bar Sajan ki ankhoon main pyar "

another namoona:

" oh yaara rub roos jane dey
deewana jaag chut jaane dey"

haha... main poetry nahi karti , sorry
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han kyon nahi


" Deekha hai peehli bar
wah wah
deekha hai pehli bar Sajan ki ankhoon main pyar "

another namoona:

" oh yaara rub roos jane dey
deewana jaag chut jaane dey"

haha... main poetry nahi karti , sorry
don't you lie... i bet that you do... ho hi nahin sakta... my experience says that girls are many times more likely to write poetry than boys... it is another thing that many of them write pretty shoddy stuff.
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don't you lie... i bet that you do... ho hi nahin sakta... my experience says that girls are many times more likely to write poetry than boys... it is another thing that many of them write pretty shoddy stuff.
seriously i donot
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i refuse to buy that...check your journal again(yup you're diary writing type as well)... there must be some.
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i refuse to buy that...check your journal again(yup you're diary writing type as well)... there must be some.
diary writing type ...hahaha .
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