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Old October 7th, 2012, 11:38 AM
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Wink Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

Asar usko zaraa nahiiN hotaa
ranj raahat-fazaa nahiiN hotaa

tum hamaare kisii taraH na hu’e
varnaa duniaa meN kyaa nahiiN hotaa

narsaa’ii se dam ruke to ruke
maiN kisii se Khafaa nahiiN hotaa

tum mere paas hote ho goyaa,
jab ko’ii doosraa nahiiN hotaa

haal-e-dil yaar ko likhuuN kyuuN kar
haath dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa

daaman uskaa jo hai daraaz to ho
dast-e-aashiq rasaa nahiiN hotaa

kisko hai zauq-e-talKh-kalaami laik
jang bin kuchh mazaa nahiiN hotaa

chaara-e-dil sivaa’e sabr nahiiN
so tumhaare sivaa nahiiN hotaa

kyuuN sune arz-e-muztar a’e-momin
sanam aaKhir Khudaa nahiiN hotaa


Nice ... post your fave poems.
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Old October 7th, 2012, 11:45 AM
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Re: tum mere paas hote ho goyaa, jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

Chalo ek baar phir se ajnabii ban jaayen ham donon
na main tum se ko’ii ummiid rakhuun dil navaazii kii
na tum merii taraf dekho Ghalat andaaz nazron se
na mere dil kii dharkan larkharaaye merii baaton men
na zaahir ho tumhaarii kash-ma-kash kaa raaz nazron se

chalo ek baar phir se ajnabii ban jaayen ham donon

tumhen bhii ko’ii uljhan roktii hai pesh-qadmii se.
mujhe bhii log kahte hain ke ye jalve paraaye hain
mere ham-raah bhii rusavaaiyaan hain mere maazii kii
tumhaare saath bhii guzrii hu’ii raaton ke saaye hain

ta’arruf rog ho jaaye to us ko bhuulnaa behtar
ta’alluq bojh ban jaaye to us ko tornaa achchaa
vo afsaanaa jise ajnaam tak laanaa na ho mumkin
use ek Khuubsuurat mor dekar chhornaa achchaa

chalo ek baar phir se ajnabii ban jaayen ham donon.
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Old October 7th, 2012, 12:13 PM
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Ishq karna hay toh, phir dard bhi sehna seekho.
Warna aisa karo, auqaat mein rehna seekho.



Us ki aadat wohi har baat adhori karna
aur phir baat ka mafhoom badaltay rehna

Jaanay kis umar mein jaayegi ye aadat ush ki
Roothna mujh se bhi aur gairon se ulajhtay rehna.

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Old October 7th, 2012, 02:54 PM
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Re: tum mere paas hote ho goyaa, jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

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Ishq karna hay toh,
phir dard bhi sehna seekho.
agar ke dard bhoj ban jaaye to
auqaat mein rehna seekho.

how is that?

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Old October 7th, 2012, 06:50 PM
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Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

Who changed the title of my thread? and why?
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Old October 7th, 2012, 07:05 PM
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Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

This is so annoying .... why do mods alter titles? They have no right to change the original content. Its wrong. Stop doing that.

Its happening for the second time, Previously My thread title " Sur kshetra" was changed to " Sour kshetra" . Is not it silly.
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Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

What was the original title ?
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Old October 8th, 2012, 12:59 AM
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Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

kisi se baat karna , bolna accha nahi lagta
tujhe dekha hai jab se koi doosra accha nahi lagta

teri aankhon main jab se maine apna aks dekha hai
mere chahre ko koi aaina accha nahi lagta

tere baare main din bhar sochta rehta hoon main lekin
tere baare main sab se poochna accha nahi lagta

yahan Mohabbat karne wale barbaad rehte hain
yeh darya hai isse kaccha gharra accha nahi lagta

main ab chahat ki us manzil per aa pohnchi hoon
teri jaanib ab kisi ka dekhna accha nahi lagta.............
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Old October 8th, 2012, 01:03 AM
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I think
This change is better to identify the nature of your post.

You must choose a forum first then type of post that you never care.


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Old October 8th, 2012, 01:34 AM
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Smile Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

Right title ... your thread ... your contributions ... I don't know who but for sure whoever did the right thing. Now it is entirely up to you ... what you wish for ... archives or COTW! You decide.

And besides ... there would have dozen threads with couple of songs and shayaris littered all over. No prizes for guessing who would have started 100 threads ...
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Lafzo ki nami ko zulfo ka saaya na mila....
Wo hamaare dil me rah gaye aur hame kiraya tak na mila.



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Re: Sonia's Shayri: jab koi doosraa nahi hota ..

jab koi doosraa nahi hota

there is a song in the movie... life in a metro ... i think

hai tujhe bhi ijazat, kar le khud se mohobbat
is zamane se chupkar, poori kar le tu hasrat
berang zindagi me rang bhar lo, kar le khud se mohobbat


very profound shairi.... beat that
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Old October 12th, 2012, 11:55 AM
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jab koi doosraa nahi hota

there is a song in the movie... life in a metro ... i think

hai tujhe bhi ijazat, kar le khud se mohobbat
is zamane se chupkar, poori kar le tu hasrat
berang zindagi me rang bhar lo, kar le khud se mohobbat


very profound shairi.... beat that
Why beat that? I do not want to beat anyone. No violence please you also stop beating .
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Why beat that? I do not want to beat anyone. No violence please you also stop beating .
Is it so difficult to understand the profoundness of the philosophy mentioned in the song ? It seems pretty straight forward to me..

Wo kehte hein ... kranti ka hai andaze bayan gaur !!
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Is it so difficult to understand the profoundness of the philosophy mentioned in the song ? It seems pretty straight forward to me..

Wo kehte hein ... kranti ka hai andaze bayan gaur !!
Wah ...

what does krantikari mean?
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