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Old July 20th, 2009, 09:56 PM
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Rap Your Way Into echarcha

Ok folks I got inspired by Dhurs parody and other limericks posted on echarcha ... I am thinking of having us come up with simple 2 to 4-liner rhymes that are like rap songs ...

So the rules are simple:

(1) create a scenario involving any known personality or personalities ... Also post it with the tag: scenario
(2) Then we start with the first stanza ... and we make sure we keep rhyming all along ...
(3) We stop until we have exhausted all the possibilities that that scenario or event could take in rhymes ...
(4) Please be generous enough to rep your fellow echarchans ...
(5) Also I think usually 2 or 4-liner stanzas have some single liner that is basically a repetition of words ... for example

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"Ghoda tha Ghamandi,
Pahucha sabji Mandi,
Sabji Mandi Mein Baraf Padi thee,
Ghode ko lag gayi thandi,
tabbat tabbat ... tabbat tabbat"
....

the last set of words is what I am referring to ... (Any poet among us who knows the terminology can please enlighten fellow echarchans about this)

For example: this is a well-known rhyme/rap by our Govinda (or was it Devang Patel)

Quote:
Madhuri dixit mili raste mein,
khaye chane hamne saste mein,
usne kaha tere sang shaadi rachaoon,
ghar tere aake main parathe pakaoon,
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Stop That, Stop That ...
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Old July 20th, 2009, 10:00 PM
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So anyone who wants to take the limelight by initiating the first scenario on which we fire our engines of creativity ... (BTW, Guess what it is usually the first set of few posts that anyone reads and then the last) ... So let your creativity be etched onto this thread (in echarcha history )

Sorry had to take the first two posts ...
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Old July 21st, 2009, 10:11 AM
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Dude we can Rap but freaking 5 step process to create a rap ? Why man why ? Why do u make everything so complicated ?

U start we will follow .......
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Old July 21st, 2009, 10:16 AM
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Dude we can Rap but freaking 5 step process to create a rap ? Why man why ? Why do u make everything so complicated ?

U start we will follow .......
Well simple things are always complicated to understand (excuse the philosophy)... These are simple rules but that doesnt mean you cant break them ... "Some rules can be bent, others can be broken, it's all in the mind" said Morpheus to Neo when he took that great leap ...
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Old July 21st, 2009, 10:32 AM
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Re: Rap Your Way Into echarcha

Screw the steps.. lets rap!

Landya bhai mile raste mein
Pakad liya mujhe khopche mein
Main bola mujhe maaf karo guruji
Kisi aur din sununga aapki philosofii
Pakaa diya mujhe aadhe ghante tak
Main bola main bahut gaya thak


Stop that (philosofy)
Stop that (philosofy)


Please Landyabhai .. stop that!

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Old July 21st, 2009, 10:34 AM
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motowner bhau, Irshaad irshaad!! Wah wah rapped you!
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Old July 21st, 2009, 10:41 AM
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Re: Rap Your Way Into echarcha

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Screw the steps.. lets rap!

Landya bhai mile raste mein
Pakad liya mujhe khopche mein
Main bola mujhe maaf karo guruji
Kisi aur din sununga aapki philosofii
Pakaa diya mujhe aadhe ghante tak
Main bola main bahut gaya thak


Stop that (philosofy)
Stop that (philosofy)


Please Landyabhai .. stop that!

yo yo... let's hear that
so he got you too
wasted half an hour too
but he's a dost too good
so on a lonely night
let's get him over
and get into the mood too

philosophy...
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Okey mah ismall attempt at retrofitting an old classic. pleej xcuje

aoo bacchon tumhe sunayein
jhalkee charcha staan ki
honest ji ko nanga karke
ga*nd maare kundan ki

haanest ji ko nanga dekh ke
jogi ji bhi bhaage the

ek haath mein tel ki sheeshi
ek haath mein l*da tha

dekhne waale dekh rahe the
kitna lamba chavda tha

pandrainchee l*nd, sabh ko hai pasand x 2x
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Re: Rap Your Way Into echarcha

I am beginning to enjoy this thread... I did not know we had such lyrical talent
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yo yo... let's hear that
so he got you too
wasted half an hour too
but he's a dost too good
so on a lonely night
let's get him over
and get into the mood too

philosophy...

whoa whoa.. hell no!
lonely night,
i aint spending with Landya mate
ever since article 377
people coming out of closet by the dozen!
i wanna get in the mood
but get me Savita bhabhi dude!
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Old July 21st, 2009, 11:14 AM
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Screw the steps.. lets rap!

Landya bhai mile raste mein
Pakad liya mujhe khopche mein
Main bola mujhe maaf karo guruji
Kisi aur din sununga aapki philosofii
Pakaa diya mujhe aadhe ghante tak
Main bola main bahut gaya thak


Stop that (philosofy)
Stop that (philosofy)


Please Landyabhai .. stop that!

Wah Wah !!! meri le li aur woh bhi aise
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Old July 21st, 2009, 11:16 AM
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Okey mah ismall attempt at retrofitting an old classic. pleej xcuje

aoo bacchon tumhe sunayein
jhalkee charcha staan ki
honest ji ko nanga karke
ga*nd maare kundan ki

haanest ji ko nanga dekh ke
jogi ji bhi bhaage the

ek haath mein tel ki sheeshi
ek haath mein l*da tha

dekhne waale dekh rahe the
kitna lamba chavda tha

pandrainchee l*nd, sabh ko hai pasand x 2x
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whoa whoa.. hell no!
lonely night,
i aint spending with Landya mate
ever since article 377
people coming out of closet by the dozen!
i wanna get in the mood
but get me Savita bhabhi dude!
good going guys... here's my contribution.

Reminding me of Savita Bhabhi why art thou
Reading her strip comic all I could say was oh hell wow

Savita will you come in my dreams
n listen to my gasping screams
your escapades did enthrall me a lot
left love stains on my bed sheet, oops big blot

Now I'm hoping you will be unblock
Or some lover will get 'em with a glock.
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Awesome ones Motowner & Razz!
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I feel small
I feel ashamed
some of you echans
have rapped me out of fame
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