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Old April 22nd, 2011, 11:24 AM
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My poems!

When I was young, I used to be a pote. My pems were stolen from me...

But I still remember some of them.

Pain-e-heart

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

In the past, I was just a peto
In the past, i was just a peot
You have made me, a lover.

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

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Old April 22nd, 2011, 11:28 AM
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haha sweet
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Old April 22nd, 2011, 11:29 AM
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When I was young, I used to be a pote. My pems were stolen from me...

But I still remember some of them.

Pain-e-heart

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself

In the past, I was just a peto
In the past, i was just a peot
You have made me, a lover.

Pain-e-heart, pain-e-liver
You, in my heart, have lodged yourself
You are funny man.
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Old April 22nd, 2011, 08:56 PM
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great stuff especially... Pote, pems, peto, peot...those r funny!!!!
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