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Old April 24th, 2001, 03:22 AM
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lets have some shayari

Opening this thread for the shayari lovers....

here goes...

Umre daraaj se maang kar laye the chaar din......

do aarju mein beet gaye do intejaar mein.

- by whom, i dont know

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Old June 15th, 2001, 07:30 AM
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just to show how partial are echarchans....how many replies to this one and how many to kavi sammelan.

i dont mean to say that people should answer but would like to know what fuels you to answer certain threads and leave others when both run along much the same lines.
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Old June 15th, 2001, 07:37 AM
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How about if I say the kavi sammelan and shayari thread are redundant and so people are not participating.. afterall un ke kuch shayari udhar (us thread me hain!!)..
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Rising Bhai....

Shayari ka na hota hai Koi Majhab,
Na Shayari ki Hoti Hai koi Jaat
Woh to bas Shayar ki Mehbooba hai,
Woh Un sabse Mohabbat Karti hai
Jo ki usse karta hai
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Old June 15th, 2001, 07:44 AM
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How about if I say the kavi sammelan and shayari thread are redundant and so people are not participating.. afterall un ke kuch shayari udhar (us thread me hain!!)..
G pe Laat I understand that if people do not want to reply to a thread it is redundant. i was just wondering how come people did not respond to this one but did to that. now if you talk about participation, then i would like to point out this thread is much much old. dated 24/06/01.
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Old June 15th, 2001, 07:46 AM
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Re: Rising Bhai....

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Woh to bas Shayar ki Mehbooba hai,
Woh Un sabse Mohabbat Karti hai
Jo ki usse karta hai
mai shaayar to nahi,
magar ae hansee jab se dekha maine usko mujhko
shaayari aa gayee....

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G pe Laat I understand that if people do not want to reply to a thread it is redundant. i was just wondering how come people did not respond to this one but did to that. now if you talk about participation, then i would like to point out this thread is much much old. dated 24/06/01.
Yaar risingsun, baat taab ki hoti hain. Kal sabke creative juices flow kar rahe the, isliye josh chada hua tha. Tere ko khush karne ke liye ek un-original wala:

Ai lahad, kah de apni basti se daag lagne na paye kafan pe
Aaj hi humne badle hain kapde, aaj hi hum nahaye huye hain.

lahad = grave/graveyard

This is from a famous Ataullah Khan song. Dunno the poet.
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Sahi bole rising bhai.. mafi de do...ab hum dekh kar quchan karungaa.. ok.. us jamane me hum yahan nahi aaya karte the shayad is liye.. I startd only a few weeks ago... warnaa mai to is thread ko tabhi hanumaan ki punch ki tarah lambi kar detaa ttha..

Chalo toda warm up ho kar ek sher pesh kartaa hoon..

Phool toudne jau too kaanto se daar laagta hai
Mehbooba se milne jau to us ke baap se daar laagta hai
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Phool toudne jau too kaanto se daar laagta hai
Mehbooba se milne jau to us ke baap se daar laagta hai
kaaton aur baap se darne wale harjai
GpeL kahalwate hue tujhe sharam na aai

Maine to socha tha aadatan laath khate hoge
Hawa ke gubbare nikle baapon se darne lage
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GPL kahlate sharm to bahut ayee
Par phir kyaa karen,
us ke baap ko dekhte hi sharm to gayee
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GPL kahlate sharm to bahut ayee
Par phir kyaa karen,
us ke baap ko dekhte hi sharm to gayee
dar laut aaee
echarcha pe to beta banato ho bahut surmaa
ladki ne baap ne to bana diya tumhara churmaa
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echarcha pe to beta banato ho bahut surmaa
ladki ne baap ne to bana diya tumhara churmaa
Bana to diya tha ladki ke baap ne humara churmaa tab..
Ladki to phir bhi meri ho hi gayi.. sasura sasur kahlaata hai ab..
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Bana to diya tha ladki ke baap ne humara churmaa tab..
Ladki to phir bhi meri ho hi gayi.. sasura sasur kahlaata hai ab..
Touche! wah wah wah wah.
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