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Old April 8th, 2016, 06:57 AM
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He didn't come up with that .. I dont believe he is capable of original thought. Ye ho hi nahi sakta.
All musings of mine in this thread are original. Some may have had inspirations... but those are obvious. The non-obvious ones are completely and totally original... from scratch. If you insinuate again that these are copies, I may have to sue you.
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Old April 8th, 2016, 10:25 AM
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All musings of mine in this thread are original. Some may have had inspirations... but those are obvious. The non-obvious ones are completely and totally original... from scratch. If you insinuate again that these are copies, I may have to sue you.
There's no need to make threats. I just said 'it looks like ..' and didn't say 'definitely'. You could have disagreed politely and I would have been ok. Why you bring lawyer to every discussion? Not required. Let's all get along. Okay?
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Old April 8th, 2016, 11:10 AM
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There's no need to make threats. I just said 'it looks like ..' and didn't say 'definitely'. You could have disagreed politely and I would have been ok. Why you bring lawyer to every discussion? Not required. Let's all get along. Okay?
Okay. It is just that I get emotional when my sweat is treated lightly. I want to be an inspiration to billions of people... I want everyone to become a poet. Not just high-and-mighty urdu-knowing geeks. Poetry is for everyone... yes, even you.
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Old April 8th, 2016, 11:22 AM
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Okay. It is just that I get emotional when my sweat is treated lightly. I want to be an inspiration to billions of people... I want everyone to become a poet. Not just high-and-mighty urdu-knowing geeks. Poetry is for everyone... yes, even you.
Really? I always knew I had potential, but never got any encouragement from anyone. Never.

Here goes,

O you sexy girl
Your slim waist is bewitching
Your long legs are awesome
You have great breasts
and a good ass.
I dream of spending the night
wanking while thinking about you.
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Old April 8th, 2016, 12:36 PM
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good one kali. I think sane should rep you after you rep him.
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Old April 8th, 2016, 12:51 PM
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good one kali. I think sane should rep you after you rep him.
Thanks, I will when he does. But tell me, why would one dream of wanking
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Old April 8th, 2016, 01:00 PM
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Thanks, I will when he does. But tell me, why would one dream of wanking
I don't think you are supposed to question artists.
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I don't think you are supposed to question artists.
It was not a question... it was just a wonder. I was wondering why you would dream of wanking... that's all
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It was not a question... it was just a wonder. I was wondering why you would dream of wanking... that's all
I had another epiphany. Here goes a musing

In the effervescence of a blooming rose
I sit in cross-legged lotus pose.
I watch as the sun rose.
The dew on the grass glows.
The river flows.
The wilderness bellows.
The pace slows.
My butt needs pillows.
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I had another epiphany. Here goes a musing

In the effervescence of a blooming rose
I sit in cross-legged lotus pose.
I watch as the sun rose.
The dew on the grass glows.
The river flows.
The wilderness bellows.
The pace slows.
My butt needs pillows.
Beautiful. Now just try converting these words into hindi... and see how smoothly they flow. I will be glad to be your guru... let me know.
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Old April 8th, 2016, 06:42 PM
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Beautiful. Now just try converting these words into hindi... and see how smoothly they flow. I will be glad to be your guru... let me know.
To be frank, I am not a novice. I haven't told this to anyone before, but I used to be a poet when I was much younger. I worked in bollywood. Then I quit. Don't ask why.
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I was teaching shayari to Bengali.

" Na Gila karta hai, Na shikwa karta hai,
Tum salaamat raho is duniya mein, yahi dua karta he"


Dada in Bengali style

" Na geela korta hai, Na sukha korta hai..
Tum saala, Mat raho is Duniya me, Yehi Dua Korta hai"

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I was teaching shayari to Bengali.

" Na Gila karta hai, Na shikwa karta hai,
Tum salaamat raho is duniya mein, yahi dua karta he"


Dada in Bengali style

" Na geela korta hai, Na sukha korta hai..
Tum saala, Mat raho is Duniya me, Yehi Dua Korta hai"

Good one! Lol
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Dunno,.. wher's sgar pai,.... But the way, the Bengalis tune everything like
" oni" it sounds...... too distasteful, weird and disgusting,.. ! I hate it.

I mean the mispronunciation like Poni,.. ( instead of pani ), Jol,.. instead of Jal,.. karta hun,.. ke bajaaye karto hun,.. and so forth,...

Also in our Gujarat,..,.. the main cities like Ahmedabad, Baroda and few small surroundings speaks normal and without any tunes-twisted, a perfect pronunciation Gujarati,... But if you go towards Saurashtra - Jamnagar, porbandar, Rajkot, Bhavnagar,.. etc
the pronunciations are twisted.... and too me, it sounds, very irritating,..

and the bad part is,... In all Gujarati dramas, Gujarati movies, they have fashion of speaking Gujarati with that idiotic style, only. Are all the dram artists and Cinema kala-kaar in Gujarat are from Saurashtra side ?

Gujaratis don't speak Gujarati, the way it is portrayed in every Gujarati drama and Gujarati movies ! That's freaking kaathiya-waadi jubaan !! UH !

What say? .... Kavi Kalidas ji, Charchilla ji,... fundoozone owner and leader maananiya Orogomi ji,.... ne comments, for us Gujarati Bandhus ?


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^^
Banda hazir hai.

BTW, every region has its own variations.
Like you calling poll as 'pole'

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This pole only deduces that,.....

If Pakavu/Bagheera/werewolf/Recconscience all ....
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