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Old February 15th, 2011, 10:58 AM
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Re: Naari-A Collection of Hindi poems (kavita).,ghav bana nasoor,patang ,pagli..

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kinna jhooth bolti hai...
trust me , main itni sulghee hoi larki nahi hoon

I donot write diary . why will i lie abt it.
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trust me , main itni sulghee hoi larki nahi hoon

I donot write diary . why will i lie abt it.
Suljhee... not sulghee... sulghee would be smouldering
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haha ... han wohi , suljhee
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Re: Naari- Bhramar-Hindi kavita (Hindi poem).

Per aap kafi sulghee hoe lagte hain. No seriously. Donot tell me you write diary n all . Geek type bhi sound karte ho ..
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Old February 15th, 2011, 11:14 AM
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Per aap kafi sulghee hoe lagte hain. No seriously. Donot tell me you write diary n all . Geek type bhi sound karte ho ..
hahahahaa galat baat.

keeping a diary is not geeky... i used to... long ago...rarely do now... There are 6-7 dairies kept in my room back in India and I always fear that my parents would read it someday... I should destroy them before that happens.
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hahahahaa galat baat.

keeping a diary is not geeky... i used to... long ago...rarely do now... There are 6-7 dairies kept in my room back in India and I always fear that my parents would read it someday... I should destroy it before that happens.
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Re: Naari- Bhramar-Hindi kavita (Hindi poem).

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Get a room you two.. yahoo chat room.
Motowner ji perhaps u hv seen many ppl are involved in non sense criticism they are going to enter their name in guinese book of records by posting thousand nonsense posts in this stage ...some or burnt ..sulghee ...geeky..some using like rediffbol and yahoom messanger ..seems they r barred frm all others....if their interest is in other things i do not know y they log on Kavita or poetry...and if they feel they are much better y they are not coming / appearing in others Kavita manch , Kavita kosh, etc ........gd luck to all

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Naari- Bhramar-A collection of Hindi Poems( kavita) pagli,patang,koyla,ghav bana...

............4...............women education.....Bhramar


Ham chahen to dur sitaron se bhi jaye
Kal ki pidhi
khub padhao nari ..
Mano usko swarg ki sidhi .


let us forget de gender son or daughter and educate well to our Naari ..woman..girl child ...as well as v can

Bhramar.

............5............ vo kya jaane aankhen kaisi kaisi duniya hoti...Bhramar

VO KYA JANE AANKHE KAISI-KAISI DUNIYA HOTI -HINDI POEM

Nanha paudha ropa kyari,
Dhire dhire bada hua,
Kabhi gira,
Kuchh jhuka kabhi,
Apne pavn pe khada hua.


Hamne seencha paala usko,
Mn he mn muskate,
kal ki soch sochkar,
bhayi thoda dar bhi jate.


Paudha kal jo bada hua to,
Kali khilegi,
Phool khilega,
Khusbu khush kar degi,
hr man.


Meri hari bhari bagiya me,
Sundar phool khila-
Dekha jo, lalchaya,
Kuchh najar lagaya.


Kuchh bhole se log,
Dekhte roj,
Khushi ho jate,
Mujh Maali ko
Dhanya kahe vo-
Aashirvachan sunate.


Magar vahin kuchh
Natkhat bhaunre,
Chor kabhi aa jate,
Ird gird sundardat ke,
vo chhalkapti mandrate.


Pankhudiyon ko noch
raund kuchh,
Foole nahi samate- dekha,
Har banaye , gale lagaye
Kuchh ko
mn muskate dekha.


Phool ye pyara
komal najuk
har aankhon me bsta ,
jara jhum ke
khusbu dekar
antar Dil me utarta.


vo kya jane
aankhen kaisi-kaisi
duniya hoti,
kuchh me pyar bhara-
to kuchh me,
Shola Nafrat hoti.


Kal ki soch soch-
ham bhayi, isiliye to darte,
na naino me neend,chain
na- soch soch bs thakte.


Kin hathon me ,
kis bagiya me,
Phool ye nyara,
Khusbu pyari,
Kaisi hogi aankhen uski,
Kya Maali sa Antarman?


Roj dulare roj khilaye,
Seenche, paale khusi rahe,
Phool ye pyara sada khila ho,
Khusbu hardam bani rahe.


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30/1/11 6.46AM.
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Re: Naari- Bhramar-Hindi kavita (Hindi poem)..pagli, sookhi roti, ghav bana nasoor,

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Motowner ji perhaps u hv seen many ppl are involved in non sense criticism they are going to enter their name in guinese book of records by posting thousand nonsense posts in this stage ...some or burnt ..sulghee ...geeky..some using like rediffbol and yahoom messanger ..seems they r barred frm all others....if their interest is in other things i do not know y they log on Kavita or poetry...and if they feel they are much better y they are not coming / appearing in others Kavita manch , Kavita kosh, etc ........gd luck to all

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Naaraz mat ho Shuklaji... aap apna bhramar chalu rakho..

Yeh chitra-soniya ki to aisi ki taisi
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Naaraz mat ho Shuklaji... aap apna bhramar chalu rakho..

Yeh chitra-soniya ki to aisi ki taisi
Abe tu bhadka mat usse... pahle hi se load lekar baitha hai...ki maine uske harek poem ke liye naye thread kholne par objection kiya hua hai... ye poet types bahut sensitive hote hain
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Re: Naari- A COLLECTION OF HINDI POEMS(kAVITA) BY BHRAMARA

Building the Nation

Use your power,
Being a clever
As intellectual
Not destroyer..

Lest you
An Engineer
Doctor
Innovator
Editor
Or
Moderator,
Aim should be
common
Building the Nation
a newly creation.
lest
a poet
or artist
dramatist
writer
or film maker..
musician
or magician..

Feel the pain
Suffocation
Struggle
And strain
Anxiety
Poverty
From your brain
Open heart
Contribute
And share
Always dare
To fight
Evils.
Live with style
In a fashion
Which thrills..

Use your power,
Being a clever
As intellectual
Not destroyer..

SurendrashuklaBhramar
17.2.11 Jal (7.35 A.M.)
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