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Old April 7th, 2011, 12:11 PM
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horry yaar kiisine digging karke cha pai ka nikaal diya hoga .. meri galti (not gulti) se mistake ho gayee
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Old April 7th, 2011, 12:14 PM
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Had a good laugh . Thank you.
then let's have a laughing poem
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Old April 7th, 2011, 12:22 PM
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then let's have a laughing poem
I laugh and laugh and laugh
until I started to cough
Then I took a sip of water
but laugh didnt stop; so water did splatter

Colleague asked me if I am crazy
I said that I am, apart from being lazy
They asked me why I laugh so much
Now i have to explain about Marv and as such


...so how is it?
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Old April 8th, 2011, 09:55 AM
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Hans hans ke pet kharab ho gaya
pet kharab ho gaya toh sab nikal gaya
sab nikal gaya toh bhook lagne laga
bhook lagne laga toh khane nikal gaya


how about this
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Re: Poetry forum now open

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I laugh and laugh and laugh
until I started to cough
Then I took a sip of water
but laugh didnt stop; so water did splatter

Colleague asked me if I am crazy
I said that I am, apart from being lazy
They asked me why I laugh so much
Now i have to explain about Marv and as such


...so how is it?
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Hans hans ke pet kharab ho gaya
pet kharab ho gaya toh sab nikal gaya
sab nikal gaya toh bhook lagne laga
bhook lagne laga toh khane nikal gaya


how about this
Terrible

You need some private lessons from shukla-ji

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Old April 8th, 2011, 03:39 PM
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Re: Poetry forum now open

funny

woh ankh bahut pyari thee
joe hum ne us ko maari thee
woh ankh bahut pyari thee
joe hum ne us ko maari thee

woh jooti bahut bhari thee
joe usne maari thee

hum toe muft main pitt gaye galib
hame toe ankho ke beemari thee
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Old April 8th, 2011, 04:42 PM
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Hans hans ke pet kharab ho gaya
pet kharab ho gaya toh sab nikal gaya
sab nikal gaya toh bhook lagne laga
bhook lagne laga toh khane nikal gaya


how about this
Not bad at all
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Terrible

You need some private lessons from shukla-ji
I know
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Old April 22nd, 2011, 06:13 AM
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What an arid dusty land
All it has is mounds of sand
One day clear while another haze
Half the year it burns ablaze

Everyone and everyday
Without fail and come what may
Lives the life of ‘Aaloo’ mash
Drooling out for oily cash

Gone away the conscience call
All we do is roam the car n mall
Motherland just summer hut
Hollow stem but roots are cut

In all this wasted life and time
Think of words that funnily rhyme
Write some lines and sure you bet
Will make you nonetheless poet

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Old April 22nd, 2011, 06:34 AM
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Hans hans ke pet kharab ho gaya
pet kharab ho gaya toh sab nikal gaya
sab nikal gaya toh bhook lagne laga
bhook lagne laga toh khane nikal gaya


how about this
Let me reword

Hans hans ke pet kharab ho gaya
pet kharab ho gaya toh sab nikal gaya
sab nikal gaya toh bhook lagne laga
bhook lagne laga toh pencil nigal gaya
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