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Old August 18th, 2015, 08:48 AM
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Today is Bad Poetry Day!

Today is Bad Poetry Day. While I am bad at poetry, I am excellent at Haiku.

I wrote this haiku after my recent trip to Greenland.

Be one with nature
Ant in refrigerator.
Greenland Vacation!
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Old August 18th, 2015, 08:56 AM
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waah waah !

I only know hindi/urdu tukbandi, can't be called shayari. Abhi abhi taaja banaya rahe.

ek bihari aurat se ishk ladd gaya hamra
pehle bhada bharte the ab fokat ka ho gaya kamra

oo hamri makanmalkin jo thhehri
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Old August 18th, 2015, 10:51 AM
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Today is Bad Poetry Day. While I am bad at poetry, I am excellent at Haiku.

I wrote this haiku after my recent trip to Greenland.

Be one with nature
Ant in refrigerator.
Greenland Vacation!
Greenland Vacation!
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If budget permits.
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Greenland Vacation!
Need more info about this
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Greenland is not green
but more white than Iceland
Bahamas zindabad
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Old August 18th, 2015, 04:49 PM
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Greenland is not green
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Bahamas zindabad
Green is not green
Abcense of green.
Canada in winters
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Old August 18th, 2015, 06:28 PM
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Rhymes are not much fun
Nothing rhymes with orange
Blorange sporange!
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Old August 19th, 2015, 12:54 PM
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Haiku has no rhymes
only syllables
with poetry interwoven.
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Old August 19th, 2015, 01:07 PM
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5-7-5 guys and girls.

Kalidas bhau, if you get time from arguing religion, please fill us in on your Greenland vacation.
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5-7-5 guys and girls.
counting syllables is such a pain
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was haiku invented by the Japs for twitter?
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In Gujarati, i remember the strict word settings are
5
7
5

In English, just three lines with 3-7 words in each line,..NO strict rules,..

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Kalidas bhau, if you get time from arguing religion, please fill us in on your Greenland vacation.
Why this much interest in Greenland? Is it supposed to be really good?
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