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Old February 4th, 2013, 04:53 AM
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Sharab Rab Ne Haraam Kardi....
Magar Rakhi Hain Halaal Aankhen..!
ahaa , twitter pe aaj kal baari aiyashi chal rahi hai. Duniya jahan ki larkiyan add kar li hain
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Old February 4th, 2013, 04:57 AM
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Mohabbat Ka Khumaar Utra Tab Saabit Hua Hum Par.............
Jise Manzil Samajhte The.. Wo Be'Maqsad Safar Nikla.
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Old February 4th, 2013, 05:01 AM
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Mohabbat Ka Khumaar Utra Tab Saabit Hua Hum Par.............
Jise Manzil Samajhte The.. Wo Be'Maqsad Safar Nikla.
Tum toh thre pardasi
Saath kya nibhao ge
Subha pehli gari se
Ghar ko laut jao ge
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Woh ab har baat ka matlab puchti hai mujhse....
Kabhi jo meri khamoshi ki tafseel likha karti thi.......!!
what is 'tafseel'? I understand from the context, but still..
achcha tha, btw.
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Old February 4th, 2013, 09:02 AM
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what is 'tafseel'? I understand from the context, but still..
achcha tha, btw.

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Old February 4th, 2013, 10:39 AM
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Tafseel can be interpretation,summary,description
In that case I will need to rework my shayari I was looking for something like admiration, wah-wah... kinda word
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Old February 4th, 2013, 11:33 AM
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In that case I will need to rework my shayari I was looking for something like admiration, wah-wah... kinda word

then "daad" will be the word.

Woh ab har baat se darti hai
jo meri har baat pe daad diya karti thi

something like that.
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Old February 4th, 2013, 03:21 PM
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then "daad" will be the word.

Woh ab har baat se darti hai
jo meri har baat pe daad diya karti thi

something like that.
Arey yaar... now I am afraid that Dhurwarandar pai will come along and say it should be "paad"... makes more sense, his reasoning
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Old February 4th, 2013, 04:15 PM
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Teri dosti hum is tarah nibhayenge,
Tum roz khafa hona hum roz manayenge...
Par tum maan jana mere manane se,
Warna yeh bheegee palkein le ke kahan jayenge...
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Old February 5th, 2013, 10:40 AM
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"Tijoriyaan bharte hai logg umar bhar, lekin afsos..
Maut ka farishta rishwat nahi leta..."
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Old February 6th, 2013, 01:49 PM
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"Tijoriyaan bharte hai logg umar bhar, lekin afsos..
Maut ka farishta rishwat nahi leta..."
tu toh reps ki tijoriyaan bhar le, diyo mat kisi ko
tera farishta rishwat leta hoga.
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